Terrorism

I’ve had another look. I think the content of what you’ve written looks quite good, but your structure and layout is not!!!!

You still have not used the template.

Headings should be Arial 20
Sub-Headings Arial 16
Document should be double line spaced and fully justified
New Sections should start on a new page
One blank space between paragraphs
Two blank spaces between end of one Sub-section and the start of the new sub-section (Sub heading)

There is no Header / Footer information (Template)

Contents heading should be the same size as the other headings and be at the top of the page

The Contents list is accurate but visually is poor (use the template)

Each new Section need to start on a new page. For example your introduction starts at the bottom of the Contents page!

Your introduction needs to include who you are and why you are writing this

Aim & objectives – start on a new page!

There’s a massive gap between the end of sub-section 3.4 and the start of sub-section 3.5. Lose it!!!

And again between 3.5 and 3.6. Makes the assignment look really poor

The picture of the World Cup Trophy adds nothing to the paper. Find something else more appropriate

Section 4 Conclusion – start it on a new page.

Section 5 Recommendations – start it on a new page.

Your last objective says that you will “identify the lessons learned from the 9/11 that can guide the Qatar through the World Cup preparations”. – You’ve done that quite nicely in the Lessons Learned sub-section, but it should also be a recommendation in the Recommendations section as well.

References Heading should be the same size as other headings and start at the top of the page.

You have a nice amount of references!!

Put a line space (or two) in between each reference.

If you spend 45 minutes doing this it will be quite a good submission.

Let me know when you’ve done it.

The plagiarism count is good, so no need to put draft 3 on Blackboard.

Just send the next draft as an email to me, then if it’s right I’ll get you to submit as final.

Hope that helps?