Historical fiction critiques

There are 4 stories and 4 pages, each critique should have it’s own page.

The critique should be directed to the author (dear author, )

1. What is working ( tell what the author is doing well with, something you like)

2. What is not working ( tell what’s is not working in the story)

3. Make suggestions for revision to help improve the story.

DO NOT RECAP THE SORY IN THE CRITIQUE. A critique is not a summary of the story.