- 15 Mar, 2021
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Essay
this is plagiarism paper !!!!
The three references were unusual because they appear to have nothing to do with the assignment or were not accessible. One reference was from the www.techwalla.com (a product and service review website) website, another was a blocked YouTube version of Food Inc documentary (which claimed it “has blocked in your country on copyright grounds” (note Food Inc was made in 2009 not as you report 2019), and the last references was a very technical article from the Journal of Food Processing & Technology (note your list of authors is incorrect for this article).
Because of the problems with the references, your TA and I independently looking at the content of your essay closely and tried to determine the original sources for the information presented in your essay. In our review of your submission, it quickly became apparent that significant portions of your essay, including major sections of paragraphs 1, 4, 5, and 6, were copied from several websites, a published book, and a journal article. We acknowledge that these paragraphs were not word-for-word copies, but they extensive use of the same words, had similar sentence structure and paragraph organization as what we believe were the actual source material. We believe that paragraphs and sentences were lifted from these sources and then altered with minor editorial changes. The problem here is that while you take extensively from these sources, you failed to use any quotation marks or cite the original source material.
Attached I have included a copy of your paper with different highlights of duplicated text found in your paper (EssayPan_markup). I have also included copies of what I believe to be the original source material with the relevant text highlighted. Here are the key areas in your essay where duplicated text appears:
Paragraph 1 is largely taken from text from page 1/53 of Chapter 5 in Social and Economic effects of the US Food System-A Framework for Assessing Effects of the Food System from the National Academies Press Open Book (https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/books/NBK305181/).
Paragraphs 4 and 5 use extensively exerts from the Wikipedia entry for “food Processing (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Food_processing)
Paragraph 5 use text from(1) the Wikipedia entry for “Aspartame” (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Aspartame), (2) the 2016 BMJ Open journal article “Ultra Processed Foods and Added Sugars in the US Diet: Evidence from a Nationally Representative Cross-Sectional Study” by Steele et al. (https://bmjopen.bmj.com/content/6/3/e009892), and 3) the 2017 Redbook article by Jessica DeCostole entitled “5 Things You should Know about Organic