diss 2

As you read over the material, please note the improvements the student has made since the 4 and 6 source essays. She has developed a strong thesis and a strong synthesis of many of the sources. This is a student paper.

Please answer the following questions:

1. In the introduction, what is the thesis statement for this paper?

2. Compare this draft to the Six-Source Essay. Choose three improvements that the student made in the Multi-Source Essay and list them.

3. What cultural factors affect the care of Elders in China? Which sources discuss this information?

4. What limitations can you identify in this student draft? How would you improve it?