Development and Aging and how they are relevant to the study of learning

The paper is really good so far.

Just add a little more critical discussion.
What do you think about all this?
What does it mean?
Why is it important?
What does it leave out?
What relevance/significance does it have?
A sentence for each on ^ should suffice.

And include a future study proposal

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